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Sat Aug 29, 2009, 5:58 PM
This is my first attempt at song lyrics, so be gentle. I understand it's hard to imagine without tone and dynamics, but try to get a feel for the lyrics themselves, and let me know what you think. I didn't post this as a piece because I want it to be completely finished when I do.

Try, try again

As I see you walking right out the door,
I know you’ll wish for something more,
From me,
You know that I’m sorry.

I always wonder if you’ll come back,
You always had the things I lacked,
Ooooh,
Yeah.

When I see that smile across your face,
I wanna get up and start to chase,
After you.
Oooh, yes I do.

Running around, I start to miss you.
Wish I could catch up, if only to kiss you,
This once.
Just this once.

You turn around, coming face to face with me,
You’ve captured my heart, oh so easily,
But how,
Did it take this long?

We’d always said, we’d wait forever,
Waiting for a time, when you were better,
Now I’m wondering if it was just a lie.
Was it all a lie?

I sit in my room, my life had changed,
There wasn’t a thing you didn’t rearrange,
Never before had a girl ever made me cry.
How’d you make me cry?

The time I’ve been waiting, seems like forever,
Waiting for a chance for us to be together,
Why is it so hard,
To be alone?


You call my name, I run right up to you.
If there was ever a time, that I really needed you,
It’s now.

  • Mood: Tearful
  • Listening to: Jonny Craig
  • Reading: Someday this pain will be useful to you
  • Watching: My heart sink deeper and deeper
  • Playing: Mandolin
  • Eating: An amazingly delicous salad
  • Drinking: Chocolate milk

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  • Current Residence: LaGrange, KY.
  • Interests: Reading, writing, guitar.
  • Favourite movie: The Lady and the Tramp
  • Favourite band or musician: Christofer Drew
  • Favourite genre of music: Metal & Acoustical
  • Favourite artist: James Feldman
  • Favourite poet or writer: Stephen Chbosky
  • Favourite photographer: Carson Haynes
  • Favourite style of art: Realistic
  • Favourite game: Fallout 3
  • Favourite gaming platform: Xbox 360
  • Favourite cartoon character: Bugs Bunny
  • Personal Quote: Dogs always want off of their leashes, but once they're set free, where do they end up?
  • Tools of the Trade: Skin and bone.

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Comments


:iconheartstrong5:
connor,
i really like the start of your song its beautiful...man ur so good at it!
:iconrollwurst:
Thank you for the fav :-)
:icondalamar789:
Thank you. :w00t:

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"He's gotta be the tragic figure standing out in the rain, mournin' the loss of his beloved. So down comes the rain, right on cue. In the meantime everybody gets dreams fulla existential angst and wakes up feeling like hell. And we all get wet."
:iconilovetobehappi:
hahaha thanx for the fave love hope you enjoy Deviant Art as your new home...your welcome to ask me anything

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